commentary meme
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scarfmanPick a paragraph (or any passage less than 500 words) from any fanfic [sic] I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means in the context of the rest of the fic, lots of awful puns, and anything else that you'd expect to find on a DVD commentary track.
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Second String
Date: 2009-11-02 03:38 am (UTC)Romana hid.
"Don't move," said Borter.
"You could have asked first," said the Doctor. "The paralysis beam was unnecessary."
"You're to come with me."
"I hope you brought a cart."
Borter went off to look for a cart. Romana asked, "What do we do now?"
"You'll have to finish what I was doing," said the Doctor.
Romana hissed to him, "I don't know what you were doing!"
The Doctor somehow shrugged immobilely. "Neither did I."
Re: Second String
Date: 2009-11-02 10:36 pm (UTC)You know, I think I remember having an agenda when I wrote this, but it's been ten or twelve years and I can't remember what it was.