Interior Dialog 1/1; the Doctor, Donna; G

[scarfman]

Title: Interior Dialog 1/1
Author: scarfman
Characters/Pairing: the Doctor, Donna
Rating: G
Setting (spoilers through): the end of Journey's End
Disclaimer: This work is derivative of property of the BBC. No profit shall be made and no market of the owner(s) is infringed upon.
Summary: My [first] fix-it.
crossposted scarfman dwfiction marriedonmars loves_them_all

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She falls silent as his fingers move over her face, over her teartracks. Her mind is in such a disordered state she can't even conceive of mounting resistance. He methodically separates all the Doctor in her mind from all the Donna, and poises his own mind over the Doctor half, ready to block it off.

Then, of course, he gives her a chance, because it's what she taught him to do.

Still poised over the Doctor half of her mind, he mentally leans back toward the Donna half and asks, Did you mean it, when you said you'd rather die?

Of course not, dumbo,

answers the Donna half, answers Donna. That was your stupid lonely-god, survivorguilty death wish talking.

fin

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Comments

[garpu.livejournal.com]

Awww...I like this. :) Thanks!

[kickair8p.livejournal.com]

:`)

[qtrhorserider.livejournal.com]

You are so good. But then I'm biased

[rita15keke.livejournal.com]

xDDDDD! Donna pointing out how emo 10 can be. xD! Hahahaha. Amazing! x]!

[shadowturquoise.livejournal.com]

I love it! She got a last parting shot in!

[charliesmum.livejournal.com]

You just linked this on the Doctor Who community. This was awesome. I can totally get behind that.

You know, the more fic I read from fans, the more I REALLY think the 'real' writers ought to pay attention.

[significantowl.livejournal.com]

that's perfect. Thank you.

[fueschgast]

Ahahaha! ♥!